This is my fifth revision on this paper. I stopped by the teacher's office on Wednesday to turn the paper in, and I ended up talking to him about what I had written. This actually works out for me. As I might have mentioned before, I kind of like the chance to discuss my writing one-on-one with someone who knows what they're talking about when it comes to writing. Even though I had to take a long lunch to do it.
Anyway, after his suggestions I came up with this final paper, which is all about how comic books craft adult-themed movies. Hopefully my changes don't hopelessly wreck my grade, which I keep fearing for, but it always seems to work out.