Well, it looks like a short break is in order. I have no idea where the story is going next, and I need to refuel.
I’m going to assemble the audio from the hotline for use. Berta is going to catch up now that the kids are in bed. Hopefully she can come up with some good direction for things to go.
I was thinking that either Tonya sours things by not really being interested in Tony, or maybe she dresses like Jack told her to (appropriate for the workplace) and Tony doesn’t want her any more. Not sure, really.
And then there’s the issue of the roommate. I think that I need another day in-story to start with. Maybe that’s the thing. Let a night pass for the characters and start them fresh in the morning. That would give me a chance to re-introduce Bob at Picasso’s, the coffee place they like to hang out at.
Ok, well, your suggestions for direction on the story so far have been great. All one of them. By my mom.
I think it’s time I started a campaign to get my in-real-life friends to be interested in my blogging.
But rather than joking about, “Oh, you have real friends?” how about suggesting a direction for the story? Hey, I’ve done my best to insulate you from my IRL friends, the least you can do is give me a nudge for where you’d like to see the story go., right? Right.
